I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi boys and girls its jonte here at school we have been reading Mr twit i like the one when miss twit puts worms in the sogetter and she had none and that's the one i liked the best bye bloggers blog soon
Kia orana Jonte this is Isabella its cool how you wrote about Mr twit, if you want to write about it, maybe you can add some more details on it and did you thought of saying Hi everybody, Instied of saying Hi boys and girls and also you don't need to say that your at school anyways blog you later!!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia orana Jonte this is Isabella its cool how you wrote about Mr twit, if you want to write about it, maybe you can add some more details on it and did you thought of saying Hi everybody, Instied of saying Hi boys and girls and also you don't need to say that your at school anyways blog you later!!
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