I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I love this acrostic poem that you have written for Kaycee Jonte. She is lucky to have a friend as kind as you. Next time remember to tell your audience what you have been working on as some people might not realise this is an acrostic poem!
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I love this acrostic poem that you have written for Kaycee Jonte. She is lucky to have a friend as kind as you. Next time remember to tell your audience what you have been working on as some people might not realise this is an acrostic poem!
ReplyDeletethank you for posting a blog comment miss Johnstone
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