I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hey yo jonte,(im sorry) Riley here! i like this like the black and blue looks good together! and you're background! but i have spotted a issue in your slide you know when you do you first facts and you go on to your second your second slide is your third slide! well i think this is good & i would like you to add more writing well that's all i have! bye jonte
hey!!!!! Jonty you doing good. I hope you like my comment so I love how you did the backgrounds you good at biking backgrounds. you can next time maybe do more.
Kia ora Jonte, you have done very well with this Ramadan post! What is the next thing you would want to do? Next time you could add more writing bout Ramadan. that's all from me, bye.
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Hey yo jonte,(im sorry) Riley here! i like this like the black and blue looks good together! and you're background! but i have spotted a issue in your slide you know when you do you first facts and you go on to your second your second slide is your third slide! well i think this is good & i would like you to add more writing well that's all i have! bye jonte
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ReplyDeletehey!!!!! Jonty you doing good. I hope you like my comment so I love how you did the backgrounds you good at biking backgrounds. you can next time maybe do more.
ReplyDeleteHey Jonte,
ReplyDeleteI love the backgrounds for the slide!
Next time you could write a bit more.
Why do they have a big feast at the end?
Kia ora Jonte,
ReplyDeleteyou have done very well with this Ramadan post!
What is the next thing you would want to do?
Next time you could add more writing bout Ramadan. that's all from me, bye.