I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hey, Girls and Boys today we have a dog called Rottweiler but for short it is called Rottie I don't know why they say that but it is super cool and this is an amazing dog to get for your home and this it the side.
Kia ora Jonte When I was younger, the Rottweiler was a very popular dog. I haven't seen one for a long time though. Make sure the text you use has been written in your own words rather than a copy and paste.
Hi Jonte It seems you are working on finding facts about some animals. My son is thinking about getting a dog for his almost 3 years old daughter. You mentioned that Rottweiler can be playful, gentle and a great companion. It sounds perfect to what he is looking for his daughter. Thank you, Jonte.
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Kia ora Jonte
ReplyDeleteWhen I was younger, the Rottweiler was a very popular dog. I haven't seen one for a long time though.
Make sure the text you use has been written in your own words rather than a copy and paste.
Hi Jonte
ReplyDeleteIt seems you are working on finding facts about some animals. My son is thinking about getting a dog for his almost 3 years old daughter. You mentioned that Rottweiler can be playful, gentle and a great companion. It sounds perfect to what he is looking for his daughter. Thank you, Jonte.